This is one of the most well-written pieces on ... oh, wait ... Part of what I enjoy about writing is tightening language and creating impact with action words, etc. I have a doc called "Writing Lab" that I've been wanting to use to show Before and After in my writing and discoveries made. Good job.

Don is co-author of the Tom Stone Detective novels on Amazon and writes content for businesses. Visit www.donsimkovich.com / https://socalcontentwriting.com

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